Improving Comments

By Anonymous -
Buenos Dias Bloggers!
In Cybersmart today we talked about improving our blog post comments.
When writing we have to ask ourselves questions (like 'Does my comment make sense?' or 'Does it ask a question?') to make our comments the best we can. here is a picture of the google drawing we made about improving comments.

 In my improved comment I added: A link to my blog and I wrote 'Kind Regards, Anuk'

I really enjoyed this activity because I want to be able to post quality comments on other blogs. Next time I might try to add more although I think this comment was perfect. I hope you enjoyed reading this blog post, I really appreciate you stopping by. Be sure to leave a kind, positive comment, Blog you later! 😸

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